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I'm here for you

Close your eyes.
hold me tight .
sleep peacefully through the cold winter night

Erase the memories
that haunt you in your deep slumber,
dont worry. you've got me, ive got you.. we've got eachother

clear your mind, drift off to sleep
as you hear me sing.
nothing bad will come after you again
as your protected by my wings

I am pure love, i am pure hope,
i'm here whenever you want me to.
just remember to call out my name....
and i'll be there to protect you
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Author's Comments

i did this at school today at 5th period.
anyway this is a draft for my coursework just like the other poem is aswell. i dont know if i shall keep it for my final piece..=.=
anyway enjoy the crappy poem ^^

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dont worry. you've got me, ive got you.. we've got eachother
>each(space)other
clear your mind, drift of to sleep
>of=off
as your protected by my wings
>you're
i am pure lov, i am pur hope
>love
>;pure
You should capitalize some of the letters..like "I"
I hope what I commented is ok^^;
anyway, I love this poem! it's sweet and simple and touching!

--
cause you remind me of a time
when we were so alive
do you remember that?
do you remember that?
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FOR CRYING OUT LOUD I SWEAR THERE IS A GHOST IM MY DAMN MACHINE! I NEVER MAKE SILLY MISTAKES LIKE THAT!!! ARGH!
>>stupid machine stupid...*sulks*

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cherry cake cherry cake, how much i love the! oh cherry cake, dear cherry cake.. you dont know how much you mean to me!!! NYHAHA! =^-^=

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